So very true Marie, loved the words especially the last line.Yvonne
marie... i like that but the thing is i really need to talk to you please.
Marie, i really really like this... it kinda reminds me of me whispers poem. you knowthe last line breaks the meaning and pattern. I do like this A lot!
I like this poem especially the last line.Cheers.......
Thanks for the visit Marie also the lovely comment.Yvonne.
So very true Marie, loved the words especially the last line.
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marie... i like that but the thing is i really need to talk to you please.
ReplyDeleteMarie, i really really like this... it kinda reminds me of me whispers poem. you knowthe last line breaks the meaning and pattern. I do like this A lot!
ReplyDeleteI like this poem especially the last line.
ReplyDeleteCheers.......
Thanks for the visit Marie also the lovely comment.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.